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I don't know if you have seen my two comments, but I am very eager to get a response from you, the author. Thank you.

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Answered.

Thank you very much, it's really nice to be able to communicate with the author who loves games, hh. Can you add more images of body sweat and foot fetish? I get excited at the thought of being able to lick her feet and smell her strong vagina smell in the love line with Octavia.

Maybe it would be better if I communicated with you in my native language? After several translations, the meaning we want to convey might change.

I played the first part and really enjoyed it.

I'm waiting for the second part, but I haven't played it yet.

I'll only play it when it's completely finished; I think it's better that way.

How many chapters and parts will there be?

Text translated by Google Translate.

I apologize if it was confusing.

Joguei a primeira parte e gostei muito.

Aguardei o segundo, porém ainda não joguei.

Só irei jogar quando tiver totalmente completo, acho melhor assim.

Quantos capítulos e partes irão ter? (Versão em português)

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I plan two books. The first one will contain 7 Chapters. As for the second, I'm not sure yet. But probably 5. I'm changing chapters numbering, so the next update will be numbered as Chapter 7 and it will be final for the first book. I plan to release the first book as a complete game on steam.

do we have estimated daate

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No. I have just started working on the update.

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This is definitely a top-tier game, I love it. Its soundtrack, plot, and modeling are exceptional, and the world-building is very grand. I love you, the author. However, I have a few points I really don't understand. 1. This is the most important point; it's a post-apocalyptic world where the population has drastically decreased and continues to decline. Why is there still a monogamous tradition? Furthermore, many people suffer from infertility, no wonder humanity is facing extinction, yet we still have monogamy. From a realistic standpoint, if humanity faced an apocalyptic and extinction crisis hundreds of years from now, it would be impossible to maintain the tradition of monogamy; the basic focus would have to be on increasing population numbers. This isn't just about wanting the protagonist to have a harem; it's also essential for a better game setting. So I really hope the author considers this. 

2. Octavia, she's truly stunning and has a strong personality; is her model your original creation? I adore her. I hope there can be more romantic plotlines with her and that we get to delve deeper into the heart of this strong woman. Love you, author. 

3. I'm wondering if the author plans to introduce the male lead's ex-girlfriend in future plotlines? Will the male lead's mother also be involved? By the way, the male lead's mother is really lovely and has such maternal qualities. I love that lady. 

Finally, I want to apologize to you, the author, because due to special reasons I can only play the pirated version, but if you release it on Steam, I will do my best to support you. Love you, author. By the way, please maintain the current level of music quality. The game's soundtrack is top-notch. Don't forget about the harem!

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Thanks.

1)I wouldn't say there is monogamous tradition. First of all we don't know much about the people outside of the Citadel and how they live. As the game progress you can hear a few times that most people just gave in to their dirty desires. That's what Cathy talks about. How no one sees the point in love anymore. Therefore, it can be assumed that everyone lives as they wish. No monogamous. But if you look at our characters, then yes. They are mostly monogamous coz it's the idea. Half of them are from the past, which is normal. The other half are just like that. They are different from other people of the future. And having a harem isn't something I'm planning.

Second, Phoenix actually has a program called "Revival(I'm not sure how I named it in English, it was a long time ago)". Octavia mentions it during your first meet if you decide not to stand up for Cathy. I thought about exploring this later, but decided to bury this idea as I didn't have much time for that plus it would only be appropriate for those who are on the sub path. What it is is actually a mandatory program for all young people. Males should be checked first and then "milked" if their semen meets the requirements. And then all young women must undergo the procedure of impregnating. But given the infertility rate and population, even this program will not save them. 

I won't have harem in my game. But there might be some throuple possible endings. 

2)Yes, she is a custom character. She uses one main base and plenty of modifications. 

3)Yes, Ellie will take part in the story and is a potential love interest. But only under certain circumstances. As for the mother, no. Mom is not a romancable character. 

Haha, after a few translations, our communication has become a bit difficult.

1- I infer that monogamy still exists in the future based on what Cathy's brother said at the end and what the protagonist thinks. I feel that it’s quite normal for the protagonist to think this way, but it’s not so normal for people in the future. As for not seeing the meaning of love, I believe this is the difference between the protagonist and others; he understands how to love better than people from the future. I actually didn’t see that plan because I helped Cathy. The infertility issue is actually my argument against the existence of monogamy in the future.

2- I think the protagonist having a harem is more in line with the apocalyptic background of the game, haha. Author, is it because you don’t like harems that you didn’t include one in the plan? I understand that Chloe won’t enter the harem, but Cathy and Octavia should be part of it. Perhaps our definition of harem is a bit different; do you think a harem is when all characters are with the protagonist? I believe a harem consists of a few characters, like those female characters from the future, Cathy and Octavia.

3- Due to translation issues, I didn’t quite understand what you said about Octavia. But I am glad to know she is original.

4- As for the protagonist's ex-girlfriend, I actually don’t like her; haha, it feels like she abandoned the protagonist.

How is the next update coming ,,,Are u all set for that,,,

se agregar el español en algún momento?

Tengo pensado añadirlo con el lanzamiento en Steam.

pero para aqui no?

Aqui também. Quero dizer que a adição de outros idiomas além do inglês será feita até o lançamento no Steam e, depois, atualizada em outros sites.

Gave this a try,love the story so far,not a fan of octavia,something of with the redhead Riley,Chloe's fun,but i'm here for Cathy,she's gorgeous 

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Hi! So I just finished reading the latest version, 0.4, and its pretty good.

The story is progressing nicely, especially the parts concerning Rashmi, but also the more romantic elements. 

Although I am still hoping that a throuple with Chloe, Cathy and the MC is a possibility...

I will happily settle for Cathy all by herself if I must.

The pictures are of the highest quality so I have absolutely no complaints there.

One thing I noticed as I was reading though was that there a quite a few grammar errors throughout the new content. No spelling errors, just missing words and/or the wrong word used.

In fact there were far too many for me to list them all here. It would take too much room and take a lot of time to type it all up.

Its also the sort of thing a professional proofreader should do, rather than an amateur such as myself.

I still loathe Octavia by the way :P

Anyways, keep up the good work.

Thank you for your feedback. I'm glad you enjoyed the new update.

As for the grammar errors. I always encourage players to share them on my discord server. There is a channel dedicated to that. But that's optional, of course.

But that's weird coz I had both AI and a proofreader do the job. And my beta testers also do some proofreading during their play. I was sure this release was the best in terms of dialogues and their quality. Might take a better look. Please share at least one example if you can. 

Thank you. 

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Ok first example is only a couple of lines in:

Rashmi says while speaking to her AI assistant Eve

Rashmi 'How long till the analysis complete?'

This is an example of what I mean. The spelling is 100% correct but the sentence is incomplete. 

It should be:

Rashmi 'How long till the analysis is complete?'

A couple of lines later you've got another one just like that one, combined with a spelling error:

Rashmi 'God damn, this coffe is cold and taste like piss.'

Should be:

Rashmi 'God damn, this coffee is cold and tastes like piss.'

There's a lot more but unfortunately I don't want to join your Discord channel. I reserve my Discord for friends and family, nothing personal. Just don't want to miss their messages among the dozens of messages that would crowd my feed if I joined heaps of AVN based channels.

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Thank you.

You're welcome.

I absolutely loved the first chapter! Do you plan to release it on Steam?

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Yes. Next year.

Thank you so much! Good luck and keep up the great work!

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That Discord thing is causing a lot of issues, if you disable it, the game will crash, if you block it in your firewall the game will crash.

If you don't have Discord (most don't) the game will crash or not work.

InvalidPipe: Pipe Not Found - Is Discord Running?

Only way to fix it is to UNREN and delete it all together.

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Yeah, I get a few reports on that. Looks like firewall is the issue. I just tested it on my laptop without discord installed and it works fine. The plugin checks if discord is installed and the firewall just doesn't allow it.

You just have to add the game to the firewall exceptions. I get it if you don't want to do it, but there is nothing I can do. Only manually delete the whole plugin folder, as you said. 

"Normal" people don't know how to do that and UNREN anything let alone delete stuff to play the game, they shouldn't have too either. 

Yes. But for most people, everything works fine. It seems that the problem occurs only if a third-party firewall is installed with custom settings. There are no issues with the default Windows firewall or with the default settings. So adding the game to the firewall exceptions should be enough, no need to unren or delete anything. I'll add a note on that to the game page and release posts.

I'll try to change that in the next update by adding a choice on a splash screen whether you allow or don't allow discord rich presence. And only after that choices the game will launch the plugin. So if you choose no, it won't trigger the firewall, and the game will launch as it should.

one of the tag is transgender so can u change gender or smt ?

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There is a transgender character. One of the love interests.

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harem or pregnancy

harem in the meaning of dating several girls, yes. Harem ending, not planned, but probably possible in some way. Pregnancy, can't say for sure. Probably at the very end on some paths.

To be honest, I really want to persuade you that in the case of a drastic reduction in population during an apocalypse, having a harem ending is quite normal. In such apocalyptic situations, maintaining the population is the least humans can do. At the very least, the future girls should be able to accept a harem; I can understand that Chloe cannot accept it because she comes from the past. I hope the author can reconsider. I really love this game.

Already bought the game last time for 10 bucks. Have to rebuy again? :( Man that sucks, 10 bucks for every increment

You don't have to. Only if you want to support me. Just wait for the price to drop to $10.

Is there any content about Daisy in this update?



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Yes

Brother can we have a date for the release ??

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Tomorrow :)

yeah read the log. Amazing bro

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brother what is happening 
how is the update coming???

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Read my latest dev update.

eagerly waiting for the update .LOVE from india, KERALA

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Amazing game so far — can’t wait for the Steam release! Chloe is definitely best girl.

I have to own this game on my Steam account — it's amazing!

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i am really looking forward to getting on steam cos i played a years ago anbd love it

i hope we will get alot of fdom stuff so i hope you dont hold back on that cos there is sadly not that many good fdom games out there

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will this come to steam?

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Yes. After two more updates.

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Im all in.

This AVN is taking such a long time to get a new update.

9 months and counting.

Why is it taking so long? What's going wrong and what are you going to do to avoid similar delays in the future?

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Hi, damalon. Thank you for your interest in my game.

Several reasons, and I point at them from time to time in my public dev updates. But in short:

  1. The largest and most devastating war since World War II is raging in Ukraine, with all the consequences that come with it.
  2. A massive amount of planned content. This will be my biggest update yet, featuring main story progression, many lewd scenes including scenes for three different paths. Combine that with the first point, limited work time, and a heavy emotional toll.
  3. Power issues. Again, tied to the war. Frequent blackouts mean I can’t always work on my PC.
  4. Some scenes are particularly complex, demanding extra attention to detail and more time to get them right.

In short, if there were no war and I were living a normal life, this game would be my top priority. I’d pour all my time and energy into it with joy. In the current situation, that’s a luxury. So, I’m just going with the flow, working as I can, and the update will be ready when it’s ready. I could cut planned scenes or simplify them to release faster, but I want the game to match my original vision, not chase quick releases or profit. Yes, development is taking a while, but I hope it’s worth it and players will appreciate the effort, even if it means a longer wait.

That said, I’m on the home stretch, and the update is almost here. Stay tuned for news on my pages!

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First of all please be aware that I dont use Patreon or Subscribestar, so if your posting your news there I will never see it.

Secondly I am sorry to hear that the war in Ukraine is affecting you so heavily. I can only imagine how much that must suck.

Third: I can only assume your regular supporters are ok with supporting you through all this. If it were me, I would think I should only be paying for a product rather than to sustain you through this crisis. Thats the Ukrainian Governments job, not your supporters...

Sorry to be an A-Hole but that's the way I see it.

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I just checked and found your post on Itch about your circumstances. I didn't see it before, so I apologize for that part of the misunderstanding,

Any news on when the update is coming out?

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The release is sliding to summer. Planned to release it this month, but I haven't finished all I planned. I have still a lot of work left. I really hope in June.

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If i buy ch2 will i pick up from ch1 where it tell you to save brilliant work btw love the story on andriod btw🫶

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Yes. Just delete the previous version and install a new one. Saves will stay intact. 

Ah thank you if i get on patreon is this a one time payment for ch2 and future updates 

No, Patreon is for subscription and regular monthly payments if you want to support me or get the latest updates and other bonuses I offer there. It's up to you. Some just subscribe to get a new update and then cancel, others support on a longer basis. 

Hey, one more comment, now that I've finished.  In the simulation when Chloe is messing with you, 

why is the MC such a little crybaby about getting a vagina?  I've already spyed on the 

teacher and liked it, and I enabled the scene at the warning, so can't it be a little more positive?


Other than that, I really enjoyed this game so far.  I love the different aspects 

you've included, and the different types of character, all of which play their roles well.  

I look forward to future updates, and I with Itch would fix this damn dialogue box.

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Honestly, just to make the scene more funny. Besides if you are ok with trans women, doesn't exactly mean you are ok being trans yourself. 

Thank you for playing.

Well, that's fair I guess.

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